Many cities have serious problems with traffic congestion? What are the causes of these problems? What are some possible solutions?

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Nowadays more and more
cities
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suffer from overcrowding and
traffic
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jams, making life and everyday tasks longer and more complicated. In my view
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happens due to poor public transport system and inaccurate time
management
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,
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improving these issues would be the best solution.
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of all many metropolises don't feature a well organised and
capillar
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capillary
public transportation so that workers and families rely on private means
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as
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car
or scooter to accomplish their daily tasks.
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sicilian
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cities
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are particularly affected by
traffic
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congestion owing to the lack of buses, metro and so on. What is
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inaccurate time
management
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is even more detrimental for
cities
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viability,
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opening schools, shops and offices at the same moment make things even worse. As a matter of
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governments and local councils should take actions to improve these two aspects to tackle the problem of roads congestion. Evidently investing more
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public transportation, increasing the number of means, making them more frequent and covering city centre as well as the outskirts could easily improve the situation. An example of
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comes from Scandinavian countries where people rarely use private means and
traffic
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flows
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smoothly. Undoubtedly delaying opening and closing hours of schools, amenities and workplaces would decrease the pressure on motorways due to a reduced number of contemporary circulating cars. To conclude
traffic
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congestion is an ongoing issue of modern
cities
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caused by low investments and poor
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that could be easily tackled with prompt actions
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as an improved public transport system and
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better time
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