Nowadays both men and women spend a lot of money on beauty care. This was not so in the past. What may be the root cause of this behaviour? Discuss the reasons and possible results

In

this

contemporary era, people are going vast behind artificial

beauty

and are forgetting about natural

beauty

. Everybody is spending many expenses on

beauty

products or

beauty

care centres. It has many causes and consequences that I will discuss in the following paragraphs. Everything which is come new and may advance has some reasons so

beauty

care has been powerful these days because of some reasons. First and foremost, movies and ads are the major sources to influence the normal masses as when we watch them

then

definitely youngster wants to try their styles. They prefer to look like actors and actresses like a role model.

Moreover

, when we go somewhere

such

as

functions

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, marriage or birthday parties and trips with our friends, we always try to look gorgeous and handsome as compared to other

persons

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people

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so that everybody praises their

beauty

and they

could

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be attracted to individuals. Here, I want to dispute the bad results of skin treatment.

Firstly

, juveniles spend a lot of money on these things

while

it is just a

wastage

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of money because skincare products are very expensive.

Secondly

, it damages the natural

beauty

of men and women that's why they always have to

use

makeup to go outside which is not good for health as every product has been made with chemicals.

For instance

, my cousin has never used these kinds of

product

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products

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,

however

,

on

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in

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her marriage she has to

use

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use them

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.

As a consequence

, after her

marriage

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marriage,

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she lost even the

last

layer of skin on her face and she has to

concern

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with the doctor and at least

around

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3 ,years she has to take for the

faces

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face's

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recovery. In conclusion, it is commonly understood that it has been a fashion these days still it is the duty of authorities and

beauty

product companies to decrease the

use

of chemicals which are very harmful,

as well

as

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,

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humans should try to

use

natural products for their face so that they can save money as well.