Some people believe that the fast pace and stress of modern life is having a negative effect on families. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

There is no doubt that owing to

contemporary

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era

now life is more stressful and busier .

Hence

, it is opined by some masses that it having some negative effect on

families

.

Although

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there are some positive outcomes of modern lifestyle, undesirable effects on

families

are far more . Commencing with the drawbacks of

modernised

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era

, the prominent one is that nowadays people have more demands and wishes other than needs, which require more money.

Consequently

, parents spend more

time

on

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for

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doing extra work to earn more money to fulfil

family's

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desires. Thereby, they do not get enough quality

time

to

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with family members

this

is not only deteriorating love and affection among

parent

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and children but

also

generating generation gap. Another worth considering point is that owing to competitive

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era

, sense of competition among youngsters in order to be successful in life is increased . Whether in education or to get placement in

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organisation, they spend late hours

to complete

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their assignment and projects.

As a result

, students do not spend enough

time

with their guardians,

therefore

, a sense of selfishness is ameliorated among

families

, everyone is busy

to accomplish

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their goals. Despite having numerous drawbacks modern world

also

have some positive outcomes on

families

, now folks have

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phone to communicate with anyone regardless of staying thousands of kilometres away from each other. Apart from

this

, public transportation like private taxis, own cars or bike and

airplane

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these are methods available now due to modern technology.

Thus

, family members can use them now to commute whether from house to work or educational institution and they can have dinner together at night and spent quality

time

with each other . To recapitulate,

this

contemporary

era

is created

huge

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impact on family members. Now neither parents have enough

time

to

sepnd

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spend

with their children since

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they are busy to accomplish occupational goals nor

children

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have much

time

as they are swamped in studies to compete

the

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in the

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competition.