The best way to teach is to praise positive actions and ignore negative ones. Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the recommendation and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, describe specific circumstances in which adopting the recommendation would or would not be advantageous and explain how these examples shape your position.

The recommendation presents a view that I would agree is successful most of the time, but one that I cannot fully
support
due to the “all or nothing” impression it gives.
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as an
educator
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I agree fully that the best way to elicit a positive response from
students
is to make use of
students
’ positive energy and
then
encourage
actions
that you would like to see repeated. It is human nature that we all want to be accepted and achieve on some level, and when people in authority provide feedback that we have done something well, the drive to repeat the action that was praised is bound to be particularly strong.
This
blanket
statement
would obviously pay dividends in situations in which a
teacher
desires to have
students
repeat particular behaviours.
For example
, if an educator is attempting to teach
students
proper classroom etiquette, it would be appropriate to openly praise a
student
who raises his or her hand when wishing to speak or address the class. In
such
cases, the
teacher
may
also
help shape positive behaviours by ignoring a
student
who is trying to interject without approval from the
teacher
. In fact, the decision to ignore
students
who are exhibiting inappropriate behaviours of
this
type could work very well in
this
situation, as the stakes are not very high and the intended outcome can likely be achieved by
such
a method.
However
, it is important to note here that
this
tactic would only be effective in
such
a “low-stakes” situation, as when a
student
speaks without raising her hand
first
. As we will discuss below, ignoring a
student
who hits another
student
, or engages in more serious misbehaviours, would not be effective or prudent. To expand on
this
point, it is important for teachers to be careful when working with the
second
half of
this
statement
, only ignoring negative
actions
that are not serious. Take
for instance
a
student
who is misbehaving just by chatting with a fellow classmate.
This
student
might not be presenting much of a problem and
maybe
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may be
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simply seeking attention. Ignoring the
student
might, in fact, be the best solution. Now assume the negative action is the improper administering of chemicals in a science experiment or the bullying of a fellow
student
. To ignore these negative
actions
would be absurd and negligent. Now you are allowing a problem to persist, one that could potentially lead to much bigger and more dangerous issues. In a more serious situation, addressing the negative
actions
quickly and properly could stop the problem in its tracks. It is for reasons like
this
that I do not advocate the idea that a
teacher
can be successful by simply ignoring negative
actions
. I do,
however
, greatly
support
the idea that the central focus of teaching should be to build on and encourage positive
actions
.
However
, the author’s all-encompassing
statement
leaves too many negative possibilities for the classroom. Perhaps a better way to phrase
this
statement
would be to say, “The best way to teach is to praise positive
actions
and ignore negative ones that are not debilitating to class efficiency or the safety of any individual”.
Thus
, in the original
statement
, there are indeed some good intentions, and there could be a lot of merit in adopting its basic principles. Data proves that positive
support
can substantially increase motivation and desire in
students
and contribute to positive achievements. In fact, most studies of teaching efficacy indicate that praising positive
actions
and ignoring negative ones can create a more stable and efficient classroom. It needs to be stressed,
however
, that
this
tool is only effective at certain levels of misbehaviour. As mentioned above, when the
behaviour
is precipitated by feelings of revenge, power or total self-worthlessness,
this
methodology will likely not work. It is likely to be very successful,
however
, when the driver behind the misbehaviour is simple attention-seeking. In many of these instances, if the
teacher
demonstrates clearly that inappropriate
behaviour
does not result in the gaining of attention,
students
are more likely to seek attention by behaving properly. Should the
student
choose
this
path,
then
the ignoring has worked and when the positive
behaviour
is exhibited,
then
the
teacher
can utilize the
first
part of the theory and
support
or praise
this
behaviour
. Now it is much more likely to be repeated. If the
student
does not choose
this
path and
instead
elects to raise the
actions
to a higher level that presents a more serious issue,
then
ignorance alone cannot work and other methods must be employed. In conclusion, one can appreciate the credo expressed in
this
instance, but surely we all can see the potential error of following it through to the extreme.
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