as most people spend a major part of their adult life at work, job statisfaction is an important element of individual well-being. What factors contribute to job satisfaction? How realistic is the expectation of job satisfaction for all workers?

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There are some intrinsic and extrinsic factors that may influence the job satisfaction of workers.
First
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, a good working
enviroment
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environment
can help people to feel more relaxed as it can provide people with useful facilities
such
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as
air-conditioner
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an air-conditioner
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, heater, printers ….
Secondly
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,
job
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a job
the job
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that
offer
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offers
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a good salary may increase the level of fulfilment that workers receive because it would help them to have a stable income. Apart from these extrinsic factors, intrinsic features
such
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as recognition should be
awared
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awarded
aware
by employers in order to make their employees
to
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apply
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have a sense of belonging. In conclusion, there are several
factor
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factors
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that can affect the job satisfaction of workers.
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Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

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  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
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