Many students are now refusing to choose science subjects at their university level. Why do you think this is happening and what is the impact on the community?

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The number of young people selecting science
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in universities is decreasing.
This
could be due to the high difficulty of the subject and leads to slowing down in society’s development.
To begin
with, students usually avoid studying materials, which contain a lot of information or require more time to understand.
Although
it is believed that science is mostly based on formulas and problems, it
also
has a huge amount of theoretical materials.
As a result
, youngsters could be thrilled and anxious about the efforts they must make in order to successfully graduate.
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, one student who had been studying
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Manchester University dropped out
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it and changed his classes and went to art classes because of its pressure. Because of
this
problem, the number of potential scientists and inventors has drastically decreased.
This
is most likely to lead to the fall down in the number of new inventions and creations in technological and scientific spheres. If there is a shortage of qualified professionals,
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race will face significant degradation.
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will result in
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between other majors and can affect the future plans for technological evolution.
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, production automation and artificial intelligence are projects closely related to
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sphere and depend on it. Taking everything into consideration, the downward trend in
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of university students taking science classes is a remarkable problem the world is facing now. One of the main reasons
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is the hardships students go through in order to get their degrees.
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since it is tightly connected with
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community’s future.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • STEM (Science, Technology, Engineering, and Mathematics)
  • Lack of passion
  • Career prospects
  • Lucrative
  • Prestigious
  • Rote learning
  • Critical thinking
  • Shortage of qualified professionals
  • Sector
  • Scientific advancements
  • Economic growth
  • Job creation
  • Foster
  • Enthusiasm
  • Engaging
  • Relevant
  • Initiatives
  • Societal values
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