It is generally accepted that families are not as close as they used to be. Give reasons why this change has happened and suggest how families could be brought closer together? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

It is undeniably known that, in the past, families used to be closer than

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today

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society which will be shown in

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essay along with suggested solutions. Nowadays, equality is one of the biggest issues in the world.

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brings no more idea of one parent

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to be a housewife and not able to work. Since both parents work, there is

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enough

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for taking care of their

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lets the gap between family’s

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get wider.

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, technologies have been developed especially the internet. Due to the fact that people can access

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interesting

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through websites, the families’ times are stolen.

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, there are still ways to improve families’ relationships.

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of how important family is, is the best way to start.

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will set your mind and body ready for any circumstances that might disturb you from the process of improving

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relationship

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between family

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blocking is one of the effective ways to set family

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have to commit to

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together,

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,

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every Friday’s night.

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, for the family who has

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, it would be better to let

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being familiar with the conversation in their family,

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, asking

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more about the school or giving them

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when they get

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will definitely make your

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feel comfortable

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with their own

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. In conclusion, it is true that families’

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are not close like they were in the past due to many factors that have changed through

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, there are many suggestions that families could use to apply to be able to bring

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the family

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family

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closer again.