big salary is much more important than job satisfaction. Do you agree or disagree?

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to choose a

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with

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wage even if it does not appeal to you at all. I completely disagree with

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opinion and think that

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satisfaction

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is much more important than

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of all, I believe that

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gives people a sense of

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that no money can guarantee. Even if someone is earning a high

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, but feels tensed and compromises with his conscience,

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person will not enjoy his life. While pursuing one’s interests will always bring pleasure and

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of

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.

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, a lot of famous researchers made their career choices

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because of appealing wages, but because they were passionate about science.

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why it is more important to choose the kind of work that makes you happy than to look only at

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.

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, doing what you like keeps you motivated and

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leads to

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career growth.

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, there is a strong

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between

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satisfaction

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and productivity. People who love their jobs can easily excel in their fields of work and achieve better results than those, who put

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, Henry Miller decided to leave his everyday

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despite a good wage and ventured to become a writer. And after enduring years of ups and

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he became one of the most famous and well-paid authors of the twentieth century.

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,

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of jobs that keep you satisfied outweigh the drawback of a low

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in the long term perspective. In conclusion, I strongly believe that

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is more beneficial than

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because it makes people happy and motivated.