As most people spend a major part of their adult life at work, job satisfaction is an important element of individual wellbeing. What factors contribute to job satisfaction? How realistic is the expectation of job satisfaction for all workers?

It is clear that
job
satisfaction
is vital for
people
because they spend their adulthood at
work
.
This
essay will discuss what factors contribute to
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of
job
satisfaction
and provide options for the realistic expectation of
job
satisfaction
for all workers.
To begin
with, the two factors which can contribute to
job
satisfaction
for
employees
are
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paid
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and
hours
work
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.
Firstly
, most of the
people
are looking for good opportunities in order to get
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position with high paid salary to meet their needs.
Secondly
, some
employees
are not satisfied
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long working
hours
such
as working on
weekend
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or overtime after office
hours
on weekdays as they want to spend their time with their family.
For example
, some
people
study as
a
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part-time
student
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students
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and they are unable to
work
after office
hours
or overtime.
Thus
, salary and
working
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can contribute to
job
happiness for
employees
.
However
, the expectation of
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job
satisfaction
for all workers cannot be fulfilled.
For instance
, if
employees
want to get
high
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salary, they will surely need to take more responsibilities in
work
and
work
under pressure. In
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to
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,
employees
may need to
work
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over time
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or on
weekend
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according to the
job
requirement to get a great promotion or bonus.
Therefore
, the hope of
job
satisfaction
will not be achieved in reality. To sum up,
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nevertheless
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it is true that
job
fulfilment is an important factor as
people
invest their adult life by working, the hope of workers for
job
enjoyment may not be perfect in truth.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • job satisfaction
  • wellbeing
  • contribute
  • meaningful work
  • work-life balance
  • career progression
  • workplace environment
  • recognition
  • constructive feedback
  • compensation
  • benefits
  • job security
  • autonomy
  • skills match
  • interests match
  • variety
  • challenge
  • economic conditions
  • labor market
  • individual expectations
  • job role
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