The government money should be invested in teaching science rather than other subjects so as to help the country make progress and develop. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people believe that the

country

should use their budget mostly in teaching

science

than other subjects to develop their

country

. By the way, I definitely disagree

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argument because there are several parts to develop a nation and the competition of getting employment will be severe. To start with,

science

is not the only subject to make them prosperous.

Although

invest

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in

science

to

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provide a high-technic, it is

also

important to focus on other fields

such

as literature, art, and music. Surprisingly, they can

also

spread the

country

's development to the world.

For example

, Korea now becomes the top of culture industry

such

as

movie

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and music. In the past, the influence of K-dramas or K-pops is limited in Asia but now they are awarded in academy award and billboard music award.

This

became a chance to advertise Korea so just consume their budget in

science

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field

is not the only way to make their industry successful.

In addition

,

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concentration in

science

can lead to higher competition. If a nation

encourage

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science

more than other subjects, many students will study and major in

science

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field

.

However

, the existing workforce and famous

science

university

is

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limited so the competition will be fierce.

For example

, there are common cognitive in Korea which the easiest way to getting a job in the future is to study in

science

or engineering major. It

is now became

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a problem of

unemployment

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the unemployment

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crisis. To sum up,

science

is not the only

field

to develop a nation and

this

will lead to unemployment crises. For these reasons, it is clear that a

country

should invest their budget in various

field

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fields

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to make progress.