The government money should be invested in teaching science rather than other subjects so as to help the country make progress and develop. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Some people believe that the
country
should use their budget mostly in teaching science
than other subjects to develop their country
. By the way, I definitely disagree to
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with
this
argument because there are several parts to develop a nation and the competition of getting employment will be severe.
To start with, science
is not the only subject to make them prosperous. Although
invest
in Change the form of the verb
investing
science
to
provide a high-technic, it is Fix the infinitive
apply
also
important to focus on other fields such
as literature, art, and music. Surprisingly, they can also
spread the country
's development to the world. For example
, Korea now becomes the top of culture industry such
as movie
and music. In the past, the influence of K-dramas or K-pops is limited in Asia but now they are awarded in academy award and billboard music award. Fix the agreement mistake
movies
This
became a chance to advertise Korea so just consume their budget in science
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the science
field
is not the only way to make their industry successful.
In addition
, the
concentration in Correct article usage
a
science
can lead to higher competition. If a nation encourage
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encourages
science
more than other subjects, many students will study and major in science
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the science
a science
field
. However
, the existing workforce and famous science
university is
limited so the competition will be fierce. Change the verb form
are
For example
, there are common cognitive in Korea which the easiest way to getting a job in the future is to study in science
or engineering major. It is now became
a problem of Change the verb form
is now becoming
unemployment
crisis.
To sum up, Add an article
the unemployment
science
is not the only field
to develop a nation and this
will lead to unemployment crises. For these reasons, it is clear that a country
should invest their budget in various field
to make progress.Fix the agreement mistake
fields
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