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Because of the global economy, many goods including what we use as daily basics produced by other countries have to be transported for a long distance. To what extent do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

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Due to the concept of
globalisation
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 there has been an increase in trade between countries across the globe, and
as a result
 of nations opening up their
market
 for foreign business, individuals are exposed to items produced in other countries, even in the daily basic
products
.
Although
,
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 there are some disadvantages
for
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such
 a system, the pros outweigh the cons
by
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 a large extent. Compared to the old days, now we are having more choices for the same commodity, from different manufacturers across the globe,
hence
 there is an increase in competition among the companies to provide better
products
 to customers.
For example
, earlier in
India
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 there were only a few automotive manufacturers like HM and Tata, but after the 1990s when the
market
 was opened up new vehicles with radical designs were introduced by companies like Hyundai and Ford .
Secondly
, people will be able to buy fruits and vegetables which are not locally cultivated .
For example
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Dragon fruit, Plum, and Kiwi which were not available in India earlier are now available in most of the
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supermarkets
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super markets
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supermarkets
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.
Finally
, globalisation
also
 allows local vendors to expand globally which allows them to boost their business,
for
instance
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 American supermarket chain Walmart is now open in India as well.
However
, there are some cons
in
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 the concept of
global
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the global
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 economy, mainly
the
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native and traditional items are often lost from
market
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the market
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 when people start moving towards more foreign
products
. Namely, with the advent of
non native
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 fruits in the
market
, some of the native fruits like Jamun and Guava have lost
its
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 place. Another main disadvantage is the amount of pollution
that is
 caused by cargo planes and ships for the logistics of these
products
 to different parts of the world. In summary, the world is now a global village where product native to one country is accessible to individuals in other parts of the world. There are some
disadvatages
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disadvantages
 to the concept of a global economy but the advantages outweigh the disadvantages
by
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 a large extent.
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