: Your children go to a local school that requires volunteers to accompany school science trips. Write a letter to the school to apply to be a volunteer. In the letter: - Introduce yourself and give details of your children who attend the school - Explain why you are interested in the position - Talk about any relevant experience that you have with children Write about 150 words.

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Hello sir,

This

is James Austin from the Newyorkshire region and my children Samantha and Jonason are studying in the 5th grade of your school.I am writing

this

letter to express my willingness to volunteer for the school science trips.

To begin

with, it would be my humble pleasure if I am given

this

opportunity to accompany students on

this

trip.

Further

, I will get ample time to spend with my kids .

Additionally

, the school that provides education to my children I feel

this

is the best way by which I can pay back by providing my valuable time to your institution.

Lastly

, you will be happy to know that I have

also

worked as a museum instructor for about a year during my early days after completing my studies so I

am having

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enough experience in handling children independently.I assure your institution ,that I will perform the task assigned to me in the best possible way .I am willing that I will get a positive affirmation from your institution to work as a volunteer. Awaiting to hear a response from your side soon. Yours faithfully, Jagjit

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greeting and closing

Use appropriate greeting and closing in formal letters, e.g., Dear Mr./Mrs. [Surname] and Yours sincerely/faithfully,

logical structure

Develop each paragraph to focus on a single topic or idea to improve coherence and clarity.

complete response

Ensure that the content directly addresses the given task and includes relevant details about your children and their school.

suitable writing tone

Maintain a formal and professional tone throughout the letter, avoiding casual language such as 'humble pleasure' and 'happy to know'.

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Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
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Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

188 words

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