"In light of the current socio-economic situation of the world, do you think this the right time for wild life preservation? If yes, what are the ways and means you suggest for this?"
The
present-day
is the age of contradictions of opinions, inventions, and actions. As if to exemplify, the civilized man pampers the wilderness Correct your spelling
present day
while
devouring it. But this
the
paradox is practically inevitable since we exploit the wild for sustenance and, Correct article usage
apply
hence
, we must sustain it for our continued future. So, regardless of economics or societal factors, a person must be preserved at any and all times. We must conserve, and cohabit with, the wild which, in fact, will preserve it in the long run. It is true that for us to survive we must exploit the environment and all life in it. So preservationist campaigns that suggest leaving the wilderness alone or becoming a part of it has
not been so popular and viable. A wiser approach is conservation, using theChange the verb form
have
God sent
resources sparingly like fiscal savings. Being wasteful, in any facet of life, is reproachable, and the same goes for wildlife. If we exploit nature only so economically that we obtain our nourishment Add a hyphen
God-sent
while
keeping her so sound that she continues bearing fruit, we will be best off, as not only us,
but Remove the comma
apply
also
generations to come will have sustained this
way. Being wasteful and destructive will only usurp the natural resources catastrophically faster which may cause the untimely demise of all humans. Also
, if we keep the spirit of harmony and learn to cohabit with body
, all may live. Add an article
the body
a body
This
planet is in fact big enough for sustaining
all life. So, being destructive to that which does not fight back is foolish, especially when the non-aggressor is our sole source. Change preposition
to sustain
To conclude
, here, we should never be scrutinizing whether it is the right day for preserving body
because any second is a good point, and, practically, the only moment, for guaranteeing that nature sustains Correct article usage
the body
so
that she withholds us and others with nurturing careCorrect pronoun usage
us so
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite