You recently stayed in a hotel in a large city. The weather was very unusual for the time of year and the heating / cooling system in the hotel was quite inadequate. Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. In your letter: give details of what went wrong explain what you had to do to overcome the problem at the time say what action you would like the manager to take
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to evidence my complete dissatisfaction with my
last
stay at the Four Season Hotel located in London. Moreover
, I would like to require a total reimbursement of the charges that I paid for this
reservation.
Last
week, on October 17th, I reserved 3 nights at the 5 stars suites, which are considered the best room
at your hotel. We were celebrated our wedding anniversary, and that is
why we chose a room
with special facilities, such
as a balcony with a lake view, and also
a whirlpool bath. Unfortunately, the temperature was extremely low in London due to an unexpected snowstorm. The heater in our room
did not work accordingly
and we could not regulate the internal temperature. Because of this
, we just had a horrible night.
With regard to face this
inconvenience, your staff informed me that we must move from that room
because the service of repair did not be available at that moment. After that, we stayed for 2 more nights at an inferior category suite, with 2 single beds and no special view or luxurious bathroom.
Considering our strong disappointment, I would like to require a full reimbursement of the value paid, because we did not enjoy your exclusive accommodation during our stay. Furthermore
, I would appreciate it with you offer a discount for our next
time at your hotel.
I look forward to hearing from you as soon as possible.
Yours faithfully,
Sarah Parker.Submitted by debi_quistina on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite