n some countries in Europe, some children from the age of 11 or 13 go to schools to learn more practical skills that will help them get a job. Other children stay in schools which provide a more general academic education. What should schools do to prepare students for the world of work?
Some
school
provides just theoritical
education while other schools are more into practical teaching. Correct your spelling
theoretical
However
, i
believe that practical knowledge is far better than Change the capitalization
I
therories
which helps Correct your spelling
theories
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the student
a student
student
to understand the real world better way.
Many Fix the agreement mistake
students
school
education system
follows Change to a plural noun
systems
books
and scale
their student's level based on the theory exams. They teach whatever Change the verb form
scales
written
in the Add a missing verb
is written
books
and do not think out of the box. Such
students, when they grow up it is very hard for them to adapt the
reality of the world. Because book knowledge you cant Change preposition
to the
execute
at every stage of life. No matter how scholar you are but when it comes to Change the verb form
executes
do
it practically recitation Change the verb form
doing
wil
not work. Correct your spelling
will
For example
, if you did your degree with distinction but you never learned any communication skills or case studies practically, that results into
outranked you from the students who did learn practical skills.
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in
On the other hand
, students who go to school
where they provide more practical lessons apart from the book theory, they
will be more confident. Due to the fact that when you perform anything in reality that just read from the Correct pronoun usage
apply
books
, it makes a huge difference. For instance
, if school
has one lecture of science where they need to submit the project by making charts or graphs or discussing the topic in a group and not just by reading it. Add an article
the school
a school
This
way not only student
will remember that particular topic but it will make the study interesting. Add an article
the student
In addition
to that
they will learn various skills Add a comma
,that
such
as communiacation
and how to use their mind out of Correct your spelling
communication
the
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the content of the book
the book's content
books
content which is very beneficial for work life.
So in conclusion, Correct your spelling
school
shool
should provide practical classes of basic studies plus behaviour therapy and communication which can help them become better at adapting the Correct your spelling
school
real world
problems at work in the future including getting a better job.Add a hyphen
real-world
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