n some countries in Europe, some children from the age of 11 or 13 go to schools to learn more practical skills that will help them get a job. Other children stay in schools which provide a more general academic education. What should schools do to prepare students for the world of work?

Some
school
provides just
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theoretical
education while other schools are more into practical teaching.
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believe that practical knowledge is far better than
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theories
which helps
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the student
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student
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to understand the real world better way. Many
school
education
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follows
books
and
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their student's level based on the theory exams. They teach whatever
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in the
books
and do not think out of the box.
Such
students, when they grow up it is very hard for them to adapt
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reality of the world. Because book knowledge you cant
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at every stage of life. No matter how scholar you are but when it comes to
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it practically recitation
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will
not work.
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outranked you from the students who did learn practical skills.
On the other hand
, students who go to
school
where they provide more practical lessons apart from the book theory,
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will be more confident. Due to the fact that when you perform anything in reality that just read from the
books
, it makes a huge difference.
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has one lecture of science where they need to submit the project by making charts or graphs or discussing the topic in a group and not just by reading it.
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will remember that particular topic but it will make the study interesting.
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they will learn various skills
such
as
communiacation
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communication
and how to use their mind out of
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content which is very beneficial for work life. So in conclusion,
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shool
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should provide practical classes of basic studies plus behaviour therapy and communication which can help them become better at adapting the
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problems at work in the future including getting a better job.
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