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Write an email responding to John. You should write at least 120 words. You do not need to include your name or address.

#email #john #name #address
Hello John, It’s been so long since I’ve heard from you. I hope you are doing well and I hope all your family is doing fine. I’m pretty good. Great to hear that you’re coming for a visit! Welcome to my country, Vietnam! I’m looking forward to showing you around. I think it’s a great idea for you to visit and experience my place for yourself. You can come to my house from Tan Son Nhat airport by Grab taxi,
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famous shuttle service in Vietnam with very reasonable price and guaranteed safety. It only takes about an hour and a half to get from the airport to my house.
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motel near where I stay, about 200,000VND for a night.
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is very safe so you don't need to worry about security, and the price is
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 very affordable. Of course, I will bring you great experiences about food and places to have fun when you come. The cheapest and one of the most delicious places to find cuisine in Vietnam is Ben Thanh traditional market. Plus, I am thrilled to take you to try it with me, and I can present to you many exciting things here. Please tell me the exact time you come here and with
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? It will be a pleasure to catch up again soon. Give my best to everyone in the family. Love,
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