You are going to another country to study. You would like to do a part-time job while you are studying, so you want to ask a friend who lives there for some help. Write a letter to this friend. In your letter Give details of your study plans Explain why you want to get a part-time job Suggest how your friend could help you find a job
Dear Maria,
I hope you are in a good health as soon as you got
this
letter. I am writing to you to share that I got in the East High University where you are studying as well. I am also
asking if you can help me to find a part-time job while I am studying.
To begin
with, last
week I received a letter that I passed in East High University. They want me to report as soon as can to fix everything regarding my papers,
since I am accepted in their special program in management course. It is a two-year course, and Remove the comma
apply
usually
I am free Add a comma
,usually
by
weekends, Change preposition
at
thus
I can use that to work.
I checked online the nearest accomodation
I can get and sad to say I can't afford because it is too expensive, the food I think I can still manage since I know how to cook and by preparing meals it will save the cost. I have my savings, Correct your spelling
accommodation
however
it will not be covered Add the comma(s)
,however
me
for the Correct pronoun usage
apply
next
two years, so I need a part-time to cover my expenses.
I thought about you, when we had conversation
Add an article
a conversation
last
time,
if you can suggest if there are openings that I can apply to or any jobs available in the restaurant your workingRemove the comma
apply
, it
will be a big help for me. If Change preposition
in, it
its
Replace the word
it's
it is
also
possible if you can enquire for me as soon as possible so I can send any requirements they needed. I will be waiting for your response.
Thank you for considering.
Regards,
JulianneSubmitted by ding
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- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite
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