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While your friend was away on vacation, you stayed in his apartment. While you were there, you dropped an expensive bowl and broke it. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, - explain what happened - apologise for the accident - tell your friend what you plan to do about the bowl

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The pie charts compare the proportion of employees in three
sectors
 in two different towns A and B in 1960 and 2010. Overall, the distribution of employment in manufacturing increased significantly, while the figure for
sales
 had an opposite trend in both towns.
Besides
, the percentage of people working in
services
 had a different trend in two years. In 1960,
town
 A witnessed the highest percentage of people working in the
sales
-related jobs at 41%, while the number of employees working in at manufacturing and
services
sectors
 had the same percentage at 29% and 30%, respectively. After 50 years, the proportion of manufacturing workers in the manufacturing area in
town
 A increased significantly to 64%, while the figure for the other
sectors
 halved to 20% in
at
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sales
 and 16% in
at
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services
 jobs.
Similarly
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 in
town
 A in 1960, 70% of people in
town
 B worked in at
sales
 and
this
 number was higher than those working in
at
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a
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 manufacturing or
services
,
sectors
 at 20% and 10%, respectively. The year 2010 witnessed a significant decrease to 53% in the proportion of
sales
 workers related to
sales
 positions, whereas
the
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 numbers of
services
 and manufacturing grew to 22% and 25%.
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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