It is believed that people should choose their jobs based on income in order to provide security for their families. Do you agree that the salary is an important factor when choosing a job? What other factors should be considered?

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a great stake of people

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work based on

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pay

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scale so that they could secure their family needs rather than the job satisfaction.

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do not agree with the given statement due to the fact that though

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aids in accumulating materialistic goods it does not provide mental peace.

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, there are many other things to be considered

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as learning opportunities, growth and immensely

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of all

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interest.

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with, People especially fresh graduates join the companies even though their educational backgrounds and interests are of no match to the duties they perform.

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, the foremost reason is to get paid

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their basic

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necessities

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as food,shelter and clothing.

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, in multiple cases they just do it in order

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certain pocket

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just for their fun activities which are partying, shopping and vacations.

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, all these things are only short term and

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not resonate the same vibes over a long period of time.

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, I myself is an example

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scenario. I have joined a software MNC even though

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it was not what

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wanted just t

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the feel of being employed and

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financially free quickly. But,

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thing's

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and the role feels more tedious than enjoyable.

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, never do something just to get paid.

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, interest plays a pivotal role while working owning to the fact that it is what

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keeps us motivated on daily basis.

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, the other factor is growth has to be considered as it

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significant in paving

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to the future.

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, it dictates pay scale.

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could either cause a surge or might plunge the existing

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. To illustrate it

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, Sachin who was a school dropout from a below poverty line family pursued his dream of playing cricket.

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, he received only a minimal amount his passion is what has driven him to become the most admirable person. To conclude,

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diverts people to take the duties away from their core interests just to give

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ability to feed their beloved.

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, there's more than that which makes humans

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work which would inspire them to be more genuine to themselves.