You have decided to leave your current job and look for a new one. Write a letter to a friend. In your letter, - explain why you want to leave your current job - describe what kind of job you are looking for - ask for some help or advice

Dear Denver, Hope you are in a good health. I am writing to you regarding my current situation. Maybe you can help me.
To begin
with, I am planning to leave my job here in the hospital and find
new
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one. It is been 5 years
I
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since I
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am working here, and I can't see progress. One reason is, the schedule they are providing is kept on changing every now and
then
,
thus
it is difficult to adjust.
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I am evening shift today and the
next
day they will give mid-shift, the timings are exhausting. Another reason is fairness at work, most of our seniors are favouring their old friends and relatives. It is difficult to work in
such
place
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where they are tolerating
this
kind of
behavior
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.
Furthermore
, I really want to expand and concentrate
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my expertise which is being a
dailysis
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dialysis
nurse. I had my training on that course
last
year and I am interested to pursue it, so I took the exam for the license. Luckily I passed,
that is
why I am eager to transfer to another hospital where they have
dialysis
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centre, perhaps, in your area. I am asking for your advice, should I resign and apply
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other hospital
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another hospital
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? If ever, do you know
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job opening in your place, if you do, please contact me and provide the requirements needed
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Thank you in advance. Your friend, Helsinki
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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

  • Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

  • Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

  • Best regards,
  • Warm wishes,

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