Write a letter to your manager. In your letter: Ask for some time off to complete a qualification. Suggest what you will do later at work if you have time off. Say how the qualification helps your job or company.

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Dear Aseem, I am writing

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letter to ask your permission to give me one week off to prepare for my immigration certification exam. I am doing

part time

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immigration course and in order to get the final

certificate

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it requires to write one paper exam for 3

hoours

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hours

. To achieve the desired result, I need a week's preparation for the test which am not able to do it along with 8 hours

office

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work. I am running

ahead

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schedules

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and no work is pending.

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, once I will resume my duty after seven days, I will do extra hours for a week to cover my additional work during

this

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off. Just so you know that, once I have my certificate I will be a legal certified

canadian

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consultant and that would help our company to get

certified

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a certified

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overseas immigration license from

canada

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Canada

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. Being in UAE

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would be an

acheivement

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achievement

to get

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license which

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helps us to increase our clientele and boost our revenue. I appreciate

considering

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my request. Thank You. Yours Sincerely,

Brijal

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Bridal

Brinjal

Desai

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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

179 words

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Write a letter to your manager. In your letter: Ask for some time off to complete a qualification. Suggest what you will do later at work if you have time off. Say how the qualification helps your job or company.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

Overpopulation of urban areas has led to numerous problems. Identify one or two serious ones and suggest ways that governments and individuals can tackle these problems.

Air transport is increasingly used to transport fruit and vegetables to other countries where they cannot be grown or are out of season. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this?

Some people believe that competition is good thing . Others believe that we should try cooperative more rather then competing against each other , descise both idea and tell your openin

Some people think that the goverment should strictly control the supply of fresh water, as it is a limited resource , while others it should not be regulated. Discuss both the sides and give your opinion

Your next door neighbour owns a small dog that barks throughout the day and the night. Write a letter to your neighbour requesting that something be done about the dog. Include in your letter: • Your reason for writing • What you would like to happen • A nice, respectful style.