Write a letter to your manager. In your letter: Ask for some time off to complete a qualification. Suggest what you will do later at work if you have time off. Say how the qualification helps your job or company.

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Dear Aseem, I am writing
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letter to ask your permission to give me one week off to prepare for my immigration certification exam. I am doing
part time
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immigration course and in order to get the final
certificate
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,certificate

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it requires to write one paper exam for 3
hoours
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hours

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. To achieve the desired result, I need a week's preparation for the test which am not able to do it along with 8 hours
office
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work. I am running
ahead
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ofahead

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my
schedules
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schedule

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and no work is pending.
Moreover
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, once I will resume my duty after seven days, I will do extra hours for a week to cover my additional work during
this
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off. Just so you know that, once I have my certificate I will be a legal certified
canadian
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Canadian

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consultant and that would help our company to get
certified
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a certified

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overseas immigration license from
canada
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Canada

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. Being in UAE
this
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would be an
acheivement
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achievement

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to get
this
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license which
also
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helps us to increase our clientele and boost our revenue. I appreciate
considering
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your considering

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my request. Thank You. Yours Sincerely,
Brijal
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Bridal
Brinjal

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Desai

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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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