Some people think that all university students should study whatever they like. Others believe that they should only be allowed to study subjects that will be useful in the future, such as those related to science and technology. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Nowadays, the tendency of high school graduates
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in college is significantly increased. Some individuals believe that learners should be able to freely choose whatever they like to learn. Others argue that they should be forced to study what will be helpful for them in the forthcoming. Both sides have their own supporting reasons. Before taking
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,
this
essay will show you some reasons. Without interesting subjects, students cannot
fulfill
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their abilities to follow their dreams.
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will make them
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their
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career
path including life purpose.
Moreover
, being forced to attend classes that they do not choose is a waste of their time while spending time on what they like can directly help them achieve their goal. 
For instance
, graduates whose dream is to be national
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can spend most of their time
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instead
of sitting in Mathematics class which is not useful for them.
In other words
, studying whatever they like will make them bring out their best potential.
This
will definitely help them not only improve their self esteem but
also
achieve their goal.
However
, studying essential subjects
such
as technology and science can make their life better.
This
can ensure that at least all learners have more knowledge in various pathways which can help them overcome a terrible situation in the future easily. They have more opportunities to apply for several jobs than those who choose to study only what they are interested
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To illustrate, recently, working in entertainment or some
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industries are prohibited for a while due to a pandemic, having several useful knowledge and skills can help them easily find their new job which can support their financial situation.
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they
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more
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likely to have
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quality of life. In a nutshell, owing to the unsecured world, having other appropriate
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Having considered
this
matter carefully, I think even undergraduates enjoy studying whatever they like, obtaining sufficient information is
also
necessary.
Therefore
I suggest that
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should use a hybrid method of learning by selecting not only whatever subjects they like but
also
essential ones.
In addition
, college should provide more opportunities for learners to take part in new experiences.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • foster
  • engagement
  • excel
  • innovative contributions
  • diversity in research
  • well-rounded education
  • broad perspectives
  • critical thinking skills
  • mental well-being
  • burnout
  • forced academic paths
  • job-ready
  • skills shortages
  • tech-driven economy
  • employment rates
  • changing job market
  • utilitarian subjects
  • aptitudes
  • wasting talent
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