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in some countries it is illegal for companies to reject job applicants for their age is this a positive or negative development?

#countries #companies #job #applicants #age #development
It is true that
age
 is sometimes included as important
criteria
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criterion
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 for determining selected candidates for
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a job
the job
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job
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jobs
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 in
companies
.
However
, it is considered
as
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an
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 illegal
job
 requirement procedure in several nations. In my
opininon
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opinion
,
this
 phenomenon is a negative development which can bring downsides for both
company
 and the labours themselves.
One
 serious problem
can
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that can
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 arise from prohibiting the
companies
 to refuse their
job
's applicants due to their
age
 is it can lead to serious
company
 loss. It is because some
job
's positions require adequate experiences which commonly owned by those
in
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of
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 productive
age
 (30-35 years old).
Therefore
, in my
opinion
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 when it is restricted to take
age
 into account for selecting new employees, the
companies
wil
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will
 be dominated by unqualified
staffs
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staff
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.
Consequently
, the
companies
 will be
adversed
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advertised
adverse
 as they should pay several
amount
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amounts
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 of dollars for
those employee
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that employee
those employees
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 do not
posess
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possess
 neither skill nor
ability
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the ability
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 to favour the
companies
' outcomes.
In addition
,
health
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the health
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 and safety of labours are the main priorities
over all
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overall
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companies
therefore
 the
age
 should be
one
 factor to be considered
otherwise
 it will damage the labour's health and safety. To
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illustrates
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,illustrates
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 mechanical occupations like petroleum engineers is
one
 of
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the job
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job
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jobs
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 that physically demanding
thus
 the applicants who apply for
this
job
 should have a vigorous body and
healthy
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be healthy
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.
This
 sort of
job
 is not suitable for those in elderly
age
 as
the
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they will not strong enough for doing
this
job
. On
this
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these
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 conditions, I believe the
age
 should be legal to be
one
 factor in reviewing
job
's applicants. To conclude, several states consider that involving
age
into
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as
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prerequisite
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the prerequisite
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 of
job
's selection is
illegal
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an illegal
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 procedure.
However
, it confines the
company
 to recruit potential
staffs
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staff
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 based on their need.
In addition
,
employees's
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employees'
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 safety and health are the primary priorities of every
company
.
Thus
 I strongly believe that the aforementioned view is a negative development.
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