You have a full time job and are also doing a part time evening course. You now find that you can not continue the course. Write a letter to your tutor. In your letter, describe the situation explain why you cannot continue at this time say what action you would like to take

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Dear

Mr.

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Aseem, I am writing

this

letter to inform you that, I won't be able to continue my part-time immigration course from the

week. As you know that, I have been working full time along with

this

part time

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study,

thus

I won't able to change my class timings too. Due to the fact that

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from the

week my husband has a night shift and he has to leave

home

by 7pm and I reach

home

by 10pm after

this

classes. So there will not be anyone

home

to take care of my kid.

However

, I can study from

home

and I have the study materials provided by you so if you can guide me online for a couple of weekends for an hour in order to prepare for the test, it would be a great help. I am going to miss the opportunity

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in person. Awaiting your response. Thank You. Yours faithfully,

Brijal

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Bridal

Brinjal

Desai

Submitted by brijal_desai on Wed Oct 27 2021

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A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)

When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.

All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.

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4Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
5Grammar mistakes
 

7 paragraphs

159 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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