You have a full time job and are also doing a part time evening course. You now find that you can not continue the course. Write a letter to your tutor. In your letter, describe the situation explain why you cannot continue at this time say what action you would like to take

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Dear
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Aseem, I am writing
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letter to inform you that, I won't be able to continue my part-time immigration course from the
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week. As you know that, I have been working full time along with
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part time
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study,
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I won't able to change my class timings too. Due to the fact that
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from the
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week my husband has a night shift and he has to leave
home
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by 7pm and I reach
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by 10pm after
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classes. So there will not be anyone
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to take care of my kid.
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, I can study from
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and I have the study materials provided by you so if you can guide me online for a couple of weekends for an hour in order to prepare for the test, it would be a great help. I am going to miss the opportunity
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in person. Awaiting your response. Thank You. Yours faithfully,
Brijal
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Bridal
Brinjal
Desai
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Structure your letter

A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:

  • A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
  • The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
  • A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)

When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.

All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.

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