Some people think that all university students should study whatever they like. Others believe that they should only be allowed to study subjects that will be useful in the future, such as those related to science and technology. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

According to the opinion of a few people, students who Pursue higher education should opt for the
branch
in which they are interested .
However
, the other group of individuals say that
branch
for University education needs to be selected based on
future
perspective and
scope
. ,
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we will consider the part that, one always go for the
branch
which makes him happy and understands better. The specialisation for higher education should always be based on one's interest as they will put all efforts to learn that, they will be happy throughout the process of learning, they explore, analyse, interpret from the heart. In the
end
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they will secure
a good scores
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and they will be having vast knowledge in the subject. After ,graduation they will join the jobs that give
opportunity
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the opportunity
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to grow
further
. By all the above process they will be happy in their
life
and personal
life
will be calmer with lots of enjoyment.
On the other hand
, everything can not be predicted in advance. No one knows what can happen in
life
. An experienced person who has faced many things and saw
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all consequences they have to face if they won't opt the
branch
which has better
future
than going for
dream
branch
. Depending on the
future
scope
, the opportunity you have to choose the
branch
in which you want to be graduate so that you will get
job
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a job
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which pays you better money and amenities to lead a more organised, sophisticated
life
. For ,example what we see nowadays is, a guy graduates opting
his
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dream
branch
and after graduating, once he starts searching for a job, he realises that the
branch
has no
scope
, unwillingly he has to do some computer course or study for some competitive exams and joins some companies or sector where his
dream
branch
will have no
scope
. To conclude, it's better to go for a
dream
branch
for graduation before in hand you should discuss with the experienced person about
future
scopes and opportunities. If opportunity provides go for the career counselling team and have a discussion before choosing the subject.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • foster
  • engagement
  • excel
  • innovative contributions
  • diversity in research
  • well-rounded education
  • broad perspectives
  • critical thinking skills
  • mental well-being
  • burnout
  • forced academic paths
  • job-ready
  • skills shortages
  • tech-driven economy
  • employment rates
  • changing job market
  • utilitarian subjects
  • aptitudes
  • wasting talent
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