You have lost an item of value on a train. Write a letter to the railway company. In your letter describe the item explain where and when you left it say what action you would like the company to take You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Sir or Madam,

#item #value #train #railway #company #action #addresses #sir #madam

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing

this

letter to inform you about my lost item

last

Sunday at the Colombo fort.

Last

weekend while I have returned back to home, I have lost my laptop bag at your railway station. It is a black colour with a red outline,

also

there is a tag inside the front pocket.

HP-branded

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laptop was there in the luggage. While I was walking to the No 09 platform, it was there with me, but when I got on the train, the baggage has been missing. I am not exactly sure how it happened. I kept it

to me before I jumped onto the train and that was the

last

memory I remembered. I would be grateful if you could put an announcement on

this

incident and help me to find the lost item because it is more important to me. Look forward to hearing from you. yours faithfully, Masha Dheerasinghe

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

firstly
secondly
thirdly
in additional
moreover
also
for example
for instance
therefore
however
although
even though
despite

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4Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
1Grammar mistakes
 

8 paragraphs

158 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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Topic Vocabulary:

valuable item
distinctive features
left behind
compartment
last seen
retrieved
item description
identifying information
contact
lost and found
appropriate department
expeditious
immediate assistance
trace
recovery

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