Some people say History is one of the most important school subjects. Other people think that, in today's world, subjects like Science and Technology are more important than History. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
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History
should be prioritised when it come
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comes
school
classes while others suggest that Science
related subjects are more crucial. This
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will demostates
that teaching Correct your spelling
demonstrate
demonstrates
History
in educational instututes
can teach the younger generation Correct your spelling
institutes
avoid
mistakes made in the past. And Add the particle
to avoid
then
explains importance
of the scientific education since it fosters new live-improving innovations.
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the importance
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with assumption
of the general public, teaching Add an article
the assumption
an assumption
history
in school
is nessesary
for building a better future. The reason is thatCorrect your spelling
necessary
,
pupils can learn about mistakes that humankind made in the past. Remove the comma
apply
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words
students can avoid doing the same wrong-doing their previous generation did. Add a comma
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and encourage
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encourages
student
to participate in the said subject. Add an article
the student
a student
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, educating childen
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children
happened
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that happened
few
decades ago can Change the article
a few
reduces
racisms and hate crimes in Change the verb form
reduce
school
.
Science
relate
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relates
subject
like Technology and Engineering are play an important role in improving human life. The future of Fix the agreement mistake
subjects
human
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humans
depents
on scientists and engineers to create innovations. Correct your spelling
depends
This
cannot happen if we are not teaching science
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in
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in
school
. Therefore
this
essay
supports teaching science
in all educational instututes
. Correct your spelling
institutes
For instance
, nowadays Correct article usage
the lastest
lastest
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latest
renenable
energy technologies are invented in engineering colleges around the world.
In conclusion, Correct your spelling
renewable
History
is a subject that guides us to the
better future without making the same mistake, Correct article usage
a
Therefore
it is mandatory for education, Science
educations are also
important because they are foster advanced technologies that improve living conditions. As a
result
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ofresult
this
essay
purposes that both subjects are equaly
important and should be Correct your spelling
equally
madated
for Correct your spelling
mandated
made
school
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