Some people say History is one of the most important school subjects. Other people think that, in today's world, subjects like Science and Technology are more important than History. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

It is argued that
History
should be prioritised when it
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to
school
classes while others suggest that
Science
related subjects are more crucial.
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will
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demonstrate
demonstrates
that teaching
History
in educational
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institutes
can teach the younger generation
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mistakes made in the past. And
then
explains
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of the scientific education since it fosters new live-improving innovations.
In contrast
with
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the assumption
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of the general public, teaching
history
in
school
is
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necessary
for building a better future. The reason is that
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pupils can learn about mistakes that humankind made in the past.
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students can avoid doing the same wrong-doing their previous generation did.
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this
and
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student
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the student
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to participate in the said subject.
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, educating
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children
about the discrimination
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decades ago can
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racisms and hate crimes in
school
.
Science
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subject
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subjects
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like Technology and Engineering are play an important role in improving human life. The future of
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is
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depends
on scientists and engineers to create innovations.
This
cannot happen if we are not teaching
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is
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school
.
Therefore
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supports teaching
science
in all educational
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institutes
.
For instance
, nowadays
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renenable
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renewable
energy technologies are invented in engineering colleges around the world. In conclusion,
History
is a subject that guides us to
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better future without making the same mistake,
Therefore
it is mandatory for education,
Science
educations are
also
important because they are foster advanced technologies that improve living conditions.
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purposes that both subjects are
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equally
important and should be
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mandated
made
for
school
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • crucial
  • comprehend
  • retrospect
  • gain insights
  • reflect on
  • sharpen
  • evaluate
  • significance
  • heritage
  • legacy
  • advent
  • breakthroughs
  • sustain
  • sustainability
  • revolutions
  • empowered
  • overcome
  • transform
  • advancements
  • collaboration
  • cooperation
  • diversity
  • fulfilling
  • promote
  • facilitate
  • prosperity
  • enhance
  • foster
  • foundation
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