You recently ordered a small item online but when it arrived it was unusable. Write a letter to the company that sold you the item. In the letter: give details about the order you made explain what was wrong with the item tell the company what you want them to do about it Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Sir or Madam,

Dear sir , I ordered pants on your online website
last
Friday (Oct - 2 -2021) and I have received them today . When I opened it, it's a big dissapoinmnt to me because the product I received was a damaged one. The pant was completely torn and unusable . The amount was
also
paid online .Now I am worried about
this
order . Since I can't use
this
product , I want you to take it back and do a refund for the same . Or get me a replacement for
this
product within two days . I do have more than 10 order history with your brand but
this
one is my worst experience ever . So please do not repeat
such
a mistake again and give
such
a bad experience to your customers . Hope you take
this
complaint seriously and get it sorted as early as possible . Thank you. yours faithfully, John Vijay
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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