You are working in a school. Write a letter to the Principal to recommend your friend for the position of sports teacher in your school. In your letter – say how long you have known him/her – describe his/her qualifications – explain why you think he/she would be suitable for the job.

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Respected Principal, I recently came to know that, there is a vacancy for

sports

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a sports

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teacher in our Institute. I am writing

this

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letter to suggest

you

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to you

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a person who is a perfect match for

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role. He is my Childhood friend Ramesh Bhatt, living in

Udaipur

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the Udaipur

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district of Rajasthan. Presently He is a Zumba instructor and a

Gym

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Trainer

since

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for

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7 years in World

Gym

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situated in his city. He

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trains some orphan

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children

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childrens

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children

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and students in gymnastics, nearby the alley he lives. Regardless of his

skills

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,skills

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he is not being paid much at the

gym

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. The main part is few of our students

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go to training for

zumba

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Zumba

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with him. Based on his experience in the sports field. I firmly believe that his skills in Zumba and

Gym

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would be best utilized

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apply

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if we offer him a job

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our Sports Mentor. Hoping for

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apply

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consideration of my suggestion. Thanks and regards Vrushal Chotaliya

vrushalchotaliya2976Fri Nov 05 2021

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The Greeting

Depending on the style and aim of the letter, you will need to adapt your greeting.

Always start an informal letter in the ways:

Dear + name
Hi / Hello + name

‘Dear...’ is more appropriate, so stick with this.

For a formal letter there are two options for the greeting:

Use Dear Sir or Madam if you don’t know the name of the person you are writing to.
Use Dear + surname if you do know their name, e.g. Dear Mr Smith or Dear Mrs Jones.

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Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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detected issues

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

157 words

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You are working in a school. Write a letter to the Principal to recommend your friend for the position of sports teacher in your school. In your letter – say how long you have known him/her – describe his/her qualifications – explain why you think he/she would be suitable for the job.

The Greeting

Many foods are shipped from far away. Some people think that eating local food is more environmentally and economically. Do you think the advantages outweigh its disadvantages?

Some people think it is more important to plant more tree in open areas in towns and cities than provide more housing. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

In their advertising, business nowadays usually emphasise that their products are new in some way why is this? do you think it is positive or negative development?