You are working in a school. Write a letter to the Principal to recommend your friend for the position of sports teacher in your school. In your letter – say how long you have known him/her – describe his/her qualifications – explain why you think he/she would be suitable for the job.

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Dear Principal, I am writing

this

letter to accommodate my friend as a sports teacher,

Therefore

, MrSmith who has been almost more than a decade since I have known him personally.

Moreover

, one of our Colleagues shared the opening of a vacancy for the same . Being the best trainer of his

last

assignment and shared partner of my flat , I would like you to consider his CV(attached) as a competent candidate.

Moreover

,he

also

extends his expertise to the local community children over weekends at the National Park. You may get his feedback from the council as well. Mr Smith owns a masters degree in arts.

Moreover

, he won double gold medals in Olympics in 2016 -2017.

Also

, he prepared athletes for the international level championship.Since our school's new policies introduced a special quota for sports, I urge you to bring him on board. Adding more to it,I am confident that if we hire him as a coach , it would be a great investment in terms of the global level appearance of ABC school and the day will not be too far when our pupils bring medals for us .

However

, I would request you to give him a chance and I am sure the ABC school will never be regretted.

Thus

, pick him up as a competent applicant. Looking forward to seeing your positive feedback Thanks, ZF

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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

Best regards,
Warm wishes,

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7Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Grammar mistakes
 

8 paragraphs

227 words

7.00

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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The Closing

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