You forgot an item of clothing at the hotel where you stayed recently. Write a letter to the hotel manager and include the following: – When did you stay and in what room? – Describe the item you left behind. – What would you like the manager to do about it?

Dear Manager,

This

is Crucial chotaliya. I am writing

this

letter to notify you, that I stayed in room 601 on the 21st of April 2021 in your hotel for 2 days. At the time of completing the checkout, I managed to collect all essential items and everything went really smooth during my stay.

However

, When I reached home. I came to know that I left an idol of Lord Ganesha by the Night lamp Table. It has been very lucky God's idol for me, which was gifted to me by my late grandfather and I had it since I was 18-years-old. It is a brown small idol of Lord Ganesha particularly of sandalwood, which has a mantra carved on it, Which says "Shree Ganesha Namah". I would really appreciate it if you can take care of posting it to my home via Canadapost Service. I will bear the postages as well. My address is unit 203,523 14th ave southwest Calgary, AB, T2R0M4. In case you need anything additional from my side, feel free to reach me at 587-936-8604. Thanks and Regards. Vrushal Chotaliya

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