You and a friend have both been accepted to a study abroad program in Paris, France. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: •Congratulate him/her for also being accepted •Ask him/her if he/she would like to be your roommate •Discuss possible activities that the two of you could do together
Dear Stephen,
I am writing to you to celebrate
success
of our acceptance at the foreign education program in Paris. Here are my purposes for writing you Add an article
the success
this
letter.
At first,
I can't
be happier for you that you'll be part of my learning journey again. You can really be proud of yourself as Wrong verb form
couldn't
this
university is one of the top institutions of the world, which produce
Correct subject-verb agreement
produces
best
graduates, who Correct article usage
the best
also
remunerated well. Add a missing verb
are also
Therefore
, you can cherish the moment for sure.
Getting chance
is Correct article usage
a chance
the
half of a job done; Change the article
apply
therefore
, we ought to focus on our study
, Fix the agreement mistake
studies
although
I demand a study partner like you, who had
contributed a lot Wrong verb form
has
on
my past success in Bachelor qualification. Change preposition
to
Consequently
, my option is limited, but to ask you to do it again.
Besides
study
, we can go to Wrong verb form
studying
cinema
and I can cook nice food for you, that you prefer most. My fitness routine can Add an article
the cinema
also
be maintained with your assistance and picking-up girls would be lot
easier for me.
All the best!
Ryan SmithCorrect article usage
a lot
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coherence cohesion
Organize your ideas in a more structured manner to improve coherence and cohesion.
task response
Ensure that all the points requested in the prompt are adequately addressed to enhance task response.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite