In a number of countries, some people think it is necessary to spend large sums of money on constructing new railways line for very fast trains between cities. Others believe the money should be spent on improving existing public transport. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Nowadays, it is important for the government to decide wisely

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which

transportation

should be constructed. Some individuals suggest that the federal authorities should spend

money

on developing the railways for the fast trains.

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argue that they should renovate other existing public transport

instead

. Both approaches have their own supporting reasons. Regarding

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the

first

idea, investment in constructing new railways encourage foreign travellers to come to visit the city as it

become

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more convenient for the tourists.

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,

traveling

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by Shinkansen, the fastest train in Japan, take only a few minutes from town to town while it takes almost a day if

traveling

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by bus.

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are

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an upward trend for

the

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tourism in Japan.

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means that not only bring thebut

also

the increasing number in the economic

system

.

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, it is worth

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investing

.

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Moreover

, the speedy train can carry more people than automobiles.

This

can reduce the traffic problems especially in the big city and it

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the amount of pollution that resulted from the

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number

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of vehicles.

On the other hand

, the government should consider improving other types of

transportation

which are already existed as the

first

priority. If they decide to construct the underground

system

as a new project, the existing transport is left behind.

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means that all the

money

that

have

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already

invested

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in that kind of

transportation

is valueless. The nation can not make any use of them.

Therefore

, the

money

should be spent on improving the existing one

first

.

Moreover

,

further

development

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the existing

system

costs less amount of

money

compared to the starting of a new

transportation

system

. In conclusion, even though improving the existing public transport is

essential

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thing, the constructing new railways can lead more benefits to the society in terms of economy and environment. In my perspective, the government should divide the budgets in both ways.