Car ownership has increased so rapidly over the past thirty years that many cities in the world are now 'one big traffic jam'. How true do you think this statement is? What measures can governments take to discourage people from using their cars?

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It is true that roads in big cities are suffocating with the unprecedented number of new private cars running on the
streets
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, particularly in the
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three decades.
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, governments in the concerned countries can mitigate
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peoblem
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problem
by placing few practical solutions.
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of all, local governments have to encourage people to use public transportations by making more buses, and trains available on the
streets
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and by reducing ticket's prices.
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, students and veterans,
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, might be offered
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boarding pass for affordable prices, or for free on the weekends.
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, many families will be
refraing
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refraining
refrain
from giving a ride to their children,
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a considerable number of cars will be off
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in the morning and the afternoon when traffic jam is at the peak.
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, social media supported by governmental associations might
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play
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paly
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a crucial role by
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initiating
awareness campaigns to point out the importance of keeping our environment clean by means of possessing one car only for each family of
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than four members , and in a
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it would be reasonable to increase the taxes on the
second
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purchased car. In my home country ,
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, taxes will be
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tripled
troubled
tried
on the
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owned vehicle.
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, many people will consider using another way of transportation,
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roads would get less congested. In conclusion, there is no doubt that many cities around the world turned out to be
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smog factories due to the abundant numbers of cars on the
streets
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, but by applying some measures ,
goverments
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governments
government
might control and mitigate
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dilemma mainly by encouraging public transportation and
palcing
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placing
more taxes on private vehicles ownership.
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