You are a member of an organisation which meets regularly at a particular restaurant. The most recent meal you had there was not satisfactory. Write a letter to the manager of the restaurant. In your letter explain why you are writing describe what went wrong with the meal and service suggest what the manager should do to ensure that you and your group return to the restaurant You do NOT need to write any addresses.

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Dear Peter, I am writing to express my dissatisfaction with the food served to me yesterday. Not only was it cold and sub-standard, but the waiters were extremely rude and inattentive. Let me explain my situation, I came to your restaurant yesterday with my associates to celebrate the winning of some big cases. In doing so, we ordered a tandoori platter along with the grilled chicken. Despite waiting for an hour, neither the order arrived nor
any
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of the serving person come to explain the delay.
Consequently
, I raised a complaint to the attentive,
however
, I was ignored at
first
and
then
was abruptly asked to wait for some more time. After some
further
delay of 15 mins, our order arrived, but ,
unfortunately
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it was cold and poorly cooked. Never have I ever been so embarrassed before my colleagues in my 10 years of service. I believe that you need to keep your things in order and train your staff properly. Since I have suffered
such
a loss, I hope that compensation in the form of a complimentary meal will be provided to us. I can be reached on the number and email given above. Thank you for your consideration and forthcoming response. Yours Sincerely, Dhruvraj Tomar
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