You will be celebrating your son’s 6th birthday next week. You want to invite one of your colleagues to attend the birthday party. Write an invitation letter to this college. In your letter, • invite your colleague to your son’s birthday party • give details of the party and its date and time • say how happy you and your family would be to have him/her at the party

Dear Jide, How are you doing today? I am writing to invite you to my son's birthday
next
week Tuesday. Dimeji, my son, is turning 6 years old, and I thought it would be a great idea to have you around. What do you think? So, the event will be held at the event centre with a white billboard directly opposite my house; you can't miss it. As I mentioned earlier, the party will be taking place
next
week Tuesday by 5pm in the evening. We will be having outdoor grills, bouncing castles, and lots of outdoor games for the children to play with.
Also
, we will be having some stand-up comedians and mascots to cheer the children up. It's going to be a fun-filled event I tell you.
Finally
, I must say that we will be so delighted to have you around. I had a prior discussion with Tolu, my wife, on
this
topic and she specifically wanted you to be around.
Therefore
, you can take
this
invitation letter to be a special invitation from Tolu to you, but through me. Till I see you
next
week Tuesday at the party, keep fit. Best wishes, Rotimi
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • heartfelt invitation
  • celebrate
  • occasion
  • significance
  • venue
  • entertainment
  • appreciate
  • memorable
  • RSVP
  • reiterate
  • looking forward
  • warm closing
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