You will be celebrating your son’s 6th birthday next week. You want to invite one of your colleagues to attend the birthday party. Write an invitation letter to this college. In your letter, • invite your colleague to your son’s birthday party • give details of the party and its date and time • say how happy you and your family would be to have him/her at the party

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Dear Jide, How are you doing today? I am writing to invite you to my son's birthday

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week Tuesday. Dimeji, my son, is turning 6 years old, and I thought it would be a great idea to have you around. What do you think? So, the event will be held at the event centre with a white billboard directly opposite my house; you can't miss it. As I mentioned earlier, the party will be taking place

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week Tuesday by 5pm in the evening. We will be having outdoor grills, bouncing castles, and lots of outdoor games for the children to play with.

Also

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, we will be having some stand-up comedians and mascots to cheer the children up. It's going to be a fun-filled event I tell you.

Finally

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, I must say that we will be so delighted to have you around. I had a prior discussion with Tolu, my wife, on

this

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topic and she specifically wanted you to be around.

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, you can take

this

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invitation letter to be a special invitation from Tolu to you, but through me. Till I see you

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week Tuesday at the party, keep fit. Best wishes, Rotimi

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

firstly
secondly
thirdly
in additional
moreover
also
for example
for instance
therefore
however
although
even though
despite

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Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

197 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

heartfelt invitation
celebrate
occasion
significance
venue
entertainment
appreciate
memorable
RSVP
reiterate
looking forward
warm closing

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