With the development of social media, more and more youngsters are being allowed unsupervised access to the internet in order to meet and chat with friends which can lead to potentially dangerous situations. What solutions can you suggest to deal with this problem
Now a days
, Correct the word
Nowadays
internet
is getting harmful Add an article
the internet
day
by day
. All preteen
are using social Fix the agreement mistake
preteens
media
roughly. There are
no scope to skip Change the verb form
is
this
situation because government and guardian are still unconscious about children
access
in
social Change preposition
to
media
. World
is becoming fast by Add an article
The world
this
day
by day
but children
are destroying along with this
. Easy access
to the Internet
will affect on
Change preposition
apply
children
's mentality a lot.In 2021,all child
are very much addicted Fix the agreement mistake
children
on
social Change preposition
to
media
, like Facebook, Instagram, twitter
and so on.
There are Change the capitalization
Twitter
also
have some solutions beside
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to
this
problem. Just we have Fix the infinitive
to follow
follow
it. Specially have to follow those who are guiding their youth or handling them. Change the verb form
followed
Firstly
, government
should give some Add an article
the government
restriction
on Fix the agreement mistake
restrictions
preteen
.Government should know Fix the agreement mistake
preteens
the
Correct your spelling
that
children
are accessing Internet
becoming horrible.
Schools should aware of Correct article usage
the Internet
this
problem, they can give proper counsel to the student as students has
to stay in school long Change the verb form
have
time
.Teacher's
are Change the noun form
Teachers
Teacher
alway
like Angel to the youth Correct your spelling
always
ster
, so they will Correct your spelling
centre
listen
their Add the preposition
tolisten
teacher
without any hesitation.
For example
, I know a boy who is very arrogant with his parents
. But when teacher
Correct article usage
the teacher
say
anything to him, he can't Change the verb form
says
ignor
that advice.That's why all Correct your spelling
ignore
time
his parents
has
to depend on his Change the verb form
have
teacher
.
Gurdian's
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Guardian's
also
can maintain this
role. If any boy or girl listen to their
Change the pronoun
them
any
guardian, Correct quantifier usage
apply
they
Correct pronoun usage
their
parents
should appreciate it. I personally think,
if we wouldn't allow to Remove the comma
apply
children
that much access
in social media
or internet
and also
if we concern their use
time
it will be more useful to their growth.
For instance
, if a boy or girl wants to use
social media
or Internet
, we should say them OK Correct article usage
the Internet
use
it in front of us. And if we have no time
for
look after Change preposition
to
about
Change preposition
apply
this
issue then
we have use
software it's called parenting software, that would be much effective. Because by Fix the infinitive
to use
this
software you can see your children
what is going on sitting in your location.Secondly
, parents
also
can a very interesting thing about their children
like try to spend more their time
with the young. They can inspire for reading books like Add an article
a novel
the novel
novel
, short Fix the agreement mistake
novels
story
, bio and so many books. They can buy it Fix the agreement mistake
stories
from
online and from Change preposition
apply
library
.
Add an article
the library
Thirdly
, Gurdian's
can suggest their Correct your spelling
Guardian's
children
to
see a geographical channel or a scientific movie that they can learn from it.Overall I think any possible and positive steps Remove the particle
apply
parents
can take to rethink their children
.Children
has
to understand their morality and good education by Change the verb form
have
aware
of their environment, Add a missing verb
being aware
parents
and their nation. Because I believe still there are so many opportunities are exist
by Change the verb form
are existed
this opportunities
you can prevent Change the determiner
this opportunity
these opportunities
this
remarkable access
. So be positive all and aware all
.Change preposition
of all
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