The charts below show the average percentages in typical meals of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts below show the average percentages in typical meals of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The pie charts compare the mean proportion of
sodium
, saturated fats and added sugars in American daily meals, which may be unhealthy to the body if ingest too much. It is noticeable that the food consumed
in
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for
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dinner
provides the highest proportion of
sodium
and saturated fat among the four types of meals,
while
snacks
have the highest percentage of added
sugar
.
By contrast
,
breakfast
seems to have the smallest amount of these three nutrients.
Dinner
provides the largest daily
sodium
intake with 43%, followed by lunch
contributes
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to 29% of
sodium
whereas
breakfast
and
snacks
have the same amount of
sodium
ingestion with 14%. Meanwhile,
dinner
also
provides the highest saturated fat at 37%
while
lunch,
breakfast
and
snacks
contribute 26%,21% and 16% respectively. Moving to the
everyday
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added
sugar
intake, unlike the other two nutrients,
snacks
are the highest source to provide added
sugar
, compared to the other three typical meals which contribute to approximately the same percentage of
sugar
, with 23%(
dinner
), 19%(lunch) and 16%(
breakfast
).
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words sodium, dinner, snacks, sugar, breakfast with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "compare" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "provides" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • nutrients
  • unhealthy
  • typical meals
  • percentages
  • saturated fats
  • fibers
  • sugars
  • impact
  • average
  • consumption
  • trends
  • breakfast
  • lunch
  • dinner
  • highest
  • lowest
  • variation
  • implications
  • balanced diet
  • recommendations
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