The charts below show the average percentages in typical meals of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The pie charts compare the mean proportion of
sodium
, saturated fats and added sugars in American daily meals, which may be unhealthy to the body if ingest too much.
It is noticeable that the food consumed in
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for
dinner
provides the highest proportion of sodium
and saturated fat among the four types of meals, while
snacks
have the highest percentage of added sugar
. By contrast
, breakfast
seems to have the smallest amount of these three nutrients.
Dinner
provides the largest daily sodium
intake with 43%, followed by lunch contributes
to 29% of Wrong verb form
contributing
sodium
whereas
breakfast
and snacks
have the same amount of sodium
ingestion with 14%. Meanwhile, dinner
also
provides the highest saturated fat at 37% while
lunch, breakfast
and snacks
contribute 26%,21% and 16% respectively.
Moving to the everyday
added Replace the word
every day
sugar
intake, unlike the other two nutrients, snacks
are the highest source to provide added sugar
, compared to the other three typical meals which contribute to approximately the same percentage of sugar
, with 23%(dinner
), 19%(lunch) and 16%(breakfast
).Submitted by 1044191048 on
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