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You are the member of a public library. You borrowed a book from the library, but could not return it by the due date. Write a letter to the librarian. In your letter -Mention the name of the borrowed book, and the due date for returning it -Describe the reason for not returning it -inform him when you will return it

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Dear Sir, I am writing to you to inform
about
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 my failure to
return
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rented
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text
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 on time due to the personal issues that I suffered recently. About my
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, the book, that I rented was Tempest,
ought
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 to be returned on Friday
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 week. The
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 was rented because it was suggested by my college tutor as a
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materials
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. I had no choice to
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 my
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in
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 the right time as I was travelling to my sick aunt’s house, which was 300 miles away.
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, I could not
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home in time due to her illness.
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, I was late to
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, which had never happened in the past. My plan is to get back home tomorrow in the evening;
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, I will be able to
return
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 the book on Friday morning. I am ready to pay any penalty cause of the delay according to the guidelines of the library. I am awaiting your response. Yours faithfully, Ryan Walker
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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