Recently you issued a cheque to someone, but when that person presented the cheque to the bank, it was returned with these words ‘Returned for lack of sufficient funds”. You are sure that there is sufficient balance in your account. -Write a letter to the bank manager. In your letter, -give him particulars about your cheque -tell him that the cheque has bounced for no valid reason -request him to look into the matter

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Dear Sir, I am writing to you regarding my

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, which is dishonoured by your branch that stated the absence of funds when I am positive about the availability of money. My CHQ Number was BS00789, and my account number was 987266, which was opened

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was issued to my son’s university tuition for the fall semester dated

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the 23rd November of 2021. About the

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was dishonoured for no legitimate cause in my view as there was enough money, and there was no overwriting or the endorsement issue so far according to my understanding.

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, bank officers did not bother to call me if they had any problems.

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, I am requesting you to investigate the issue and provide me explanations against the issue as it is going to affect my credit score when I have an excellent credit report. I am awaiting your response. Yours faithfully, Ryan Smith

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