The role of the family in
children
’s growth becomes more and more essential nowadays. Some people argue that
children
from poor
parents
are better equipped in solving the challenges in adult
life
rather than those in richer
families
. From my point of view, I strongly agree with
this
statement, I will elaborate my opinion in the following paragraphs.
To begin
with, adversity from relatively poor
families
enables
children
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in their adult
life
.
For example
, Jason Ma, the founder of Alibaba, a
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enterprise in China, is actually from a middle-class family. Living in a moderate-income background, he has learned how to deal with
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tricky problem and how to overcome
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an early age. In another word, he has known that nothing successful comes from
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since he was a little boy. Motivated by
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, teenagers from middle-income
families
will work hard all the way through and most of the time, they are more likely to confront the challenges in
life
and
therefore
live an envious successful
life
when they grow up. All of
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are contributed to their hardship
life
in childhood.
Conversely
, those who are overprotected by their affluent
parents
could largely lack the capacity to be independent and to address issues.
Firstly
, just imagine living in a wealthy family,
parents
will give comprehensive support to their
children
, which means kids may not realise or worry about money-related issues, and even their lives will be easier without any blocks as their
parents
will help them to flee from difficulties to the maximum.
Therefore
, these
children
will have trouble in decision-making in later
life
. More seriously, without help from their
parents
, they would be unable to meet the
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demands in employment, education or even their own marriage.
Consequently
, compared to
children
from
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poor, rich family kids are harder to solve problems correctly.
In conclusion, contributing to all of the mentioned spoiled situations that kids from rich
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may experience, I purely believe that
children
in poor
families
will be more prepared to solve problems in the future
life
.