You have just started a course in a college which has no sports facilities of its own. Write a letter to the manager of the nearest private sports club. In your letter - introduce yourself - say why you are interested in this sports club - ask some questions about the club e.g. facilities, members, costs Begin as follows: Dear Sir or Madam,
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to
inquiry
about Lena fitness club located in Bearing road. I found that your gym provides Replace the word
inquire
variety
of workouts program which interested me. Add an article
a variety
Thus
, I would like to ask about the membership fee, fitness timetable, etc. before making a decision.
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First
of all, let me introduce myself. My name Linking Words
Jenny
Lee, an international student from HBS college. Currently, I am studying in sport science. I Add a missing verb
is Jenny
first
saw Lena fitness club while I was walking back to my apartment. I am interested in your club because you have several classes Linking Words
such
as yoga, cycling, HIIT, etc. On top of that, I heard that personal trainers at Lena gym are excellent.
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However
, I would like to know more detail about pricing packages whether you have a promotion for 50-hours training with personal trainers. Another question is where I can check Linking Words
timetables
of yoga classes. Correct article usage
the timetables
Lastly
, it would be great if you could give me information about payment terms.
I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours faithfully,
Jenny LeeLinking Words
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite