The position of women has changed a great deal in many societies over the past 50 years. But these societies cannot claim to have achieved gender equality. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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is given more opportunities
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different kinds of jobs while
gender
equality
is still a tough task for
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society
to accomplish. I totally agree that
women
play a much more important role in the division of
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in
society
than that in the past and total
equality
between
men
and
women
cannot be realized nowadays. On the one hand,
women
are achieving more educationally and taking part more in the
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force than ever before. In recent years, there is not
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a significant difference between the number of female students and male students. When
women
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to be educated in a university or college, they could be qualified in the workplace in
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.
Therefore
, Human resource managers of many companies tend to take the abilities of candidates more into account but not the
gender
. There are more
women
working as government officials in many countries around the world and
for instance
, in 2014, Angela Merkel was the
first
female prime minister in Germany.
However
, it has been an existing problem of inequality of
gender
since the beginning of
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humanity. Because of the biological difference between
women
and
men
, division of
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in
the
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society
result
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in
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inequality between them. Even though
women
can be treated in many positions as
men
in
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society
, it is no doubt that there are some jobs which more suitable for
men
than
women
.
For example
,
men
are good at logical thinking and they would rather choose to study engineering science and natural science in the universities. In the contrast,
women
are skilled in emotional thinking and they like to research
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the problems in
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society
.
Thus
,
although
the inequality between different
gender
could be gradually cut down, it is hard to realize the total
equality
of
gender
for
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society
. To conclude, I strongly believe that
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gender
equality
will be continuously improved in the future and
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absolute
equality
is the goal of
the
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society
but it is
also
a tough task to make it come true.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • gender equality
  • historical context
  • gender pay gap
  • underrepresentation
  • leadership roles
  • gender-based violence
  • educational opportunities
  • workforce
  • legal reforms
  • statistics
  • case studies
  • global perspective
  • progressive changes
  • cultural differences
  • empowerment
  • patriarchy
  • systemic discrimination
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