The position of women has changed a great deal in many societies over the past 50 years. But these societies cannot claim to have achieved gender equality. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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is given more opportunities

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different kinds of jobs while

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is still a tough task for

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to accomplish. I totally agree that

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play a much more important role in the division of

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than that in the past and total

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between

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and

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cannot be realized nowadays. On the one hand,

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are achieving more educationally and taking part more in the

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force than ever before. In recent years, there is not

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a significant difference between the number of female students and male students. When

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have

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to be educated in a university or college, they could be qualified in the workplace in

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.

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, Human resource managers of many companies tend to take the abilities of candidates more into account but not the

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. There are more

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working as government officials in many countries around the world and

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, in 2014, Angela Merkel was the

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female prime minister in Germany.

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, it has been an existing problem of inequality of

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humanity. Because of the biological difference between

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and

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, division of

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inequality between them. Even though

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can be treated in many positions as

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in

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, it is no doubt that there are some jobs which more suitable for

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than

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.

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,

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are good at logical thinking and they would rather choose to study engineering science and natural science in the universities. In the contrast,

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are skilled in emotional thinking and they like to research

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.

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the inequality between different

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could be gradually cut down, it is hard to realize the total

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of

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. To conclude, I strongly believe that

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will be continuously improved in the future and

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absolute

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is the goal of

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but it is

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a tough task to make it come true.