You live in a small university town. Last week, you drove to a big city about two hours away to buy a new laptop at a good price. You worked on the laptop all week and finished writing a long assignment that is due shortly. However, this week, the laptop doesn't even switch on. Write to the store. In your letter: tell the store where you live & what happened explain the problem with the laptop state what action you would like the store to take
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am a consumer living in Easttown, which is two hours drive away from your store. I am writing
this
letter concerning the defects that happened on the laptop I bought last
week and the requirement for replacement.
I have used this
computer to write a lengthy assignment that will be due very soon. This
morning, I could not turn it on. Therefore
all my work on the task, which could affect my graduation, has gone. If I can not get it back, I might fail the class and not get my bachelor's degree.
Therefore
, please help recover the data on the hard disk as soon as possible. And since the laptop is still in warranty, a replacement will be required if it is no longer fixable.
Please look into this
matter and take action.
Yours sincerely,
James BrownSubmitted by lvwei1001 on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite
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