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Some people think the government should invest more money in teaching science than other subjects in order for a country to develop and progress. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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There is a widespread belief that technology plays a vital role in the metabolism of current society.
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increasing
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 number of educationalists propose that the official ought to boost funds in
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science
 education than other
subjects
. From my point of view, I
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this
 proposal to some extent, but I disagree that investing more than other
subjects
. As society is advancing by leaps and bounds, the frontier technological and scientific advances have found their own way into every corner of people's life and work.
This
 had been proved true by the 19th-century U.K and 20th-century U.S.A., who largely depended on, respectively,
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 revolution and
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 industry for their prosperity.
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, in 21-century, the occurrence of artificial intelligence
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has altered everyone's lifestyle. All of these are extremely effective in raising productivity and creativity. In
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science
 technology is fundamental to the development and progress of a country. And
thus
， the organization should expend sufficient fiscal revenues on teaching
science
.
However
, in
this
 knowledge-oriented society, schooling is never about what provides us with the immediate return, but the systematic knowledge carrier that can broaden our mind, in which liberal arts, sciences, or humanities coordinate together, building our insights and reflections, and bridging our rationality and personality. Except for the
science
 subject, other
subjects
 are the same important. Without
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equal investment in various
subjects
, what would preclude the country from
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.
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 Based on the analysis above, I tend to believe that only
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 allocating the fiscal expenditure on education, the students can be tailored in an
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 way, which will facilitate the growth of a country.
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