Graduates who cannot find work in their chosen field should be advised to do a second degree,rather than taking a job that does not interest them. To what extent do you agree with this statement?

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These days,it can be difficult to get a good job when you leave university.Many more students are studying for degrees,so the job market is very competitive.Some people believe that it is better to take a
second
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degree if you cannot secure suitable employment.But I tend to think it depends on your circumstances. The
first
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consideration is finance.Universities charge high fees for their courses,and in some
countries
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it can cost up to£25000 to do a
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degree.
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some students are fortunate in their parents can fund their studies,many others have to borrow the money and repay it when they start working.In my view,it is not a good idea to recommend that these students continue
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situation,particularly if they have no real desire to study
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. I think we now have to accept that there are not always enough jobs to go around.So the
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consideration is that it might be better to be patient,start at the bottom and work your way up the career ladder.
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is what my father did,and it definitely gave him a fuller understanding of his chosen field.Ultimately,the decision may be a difficult one.
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feel that those who do not really want to continue studying or cannot afford it should not be encouraged to do so.Unless you had already planned to do a
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course,it could turn out to be much better if you start working,whatever the status or salary.
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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