A big salary is much more important than job satisfaction. Do you agree or disagree?
For a lot of
people
there is quite often arise the same old question if big salary Add a comma
,people
more
significant than job satisfaction. I personally completely disagree with Add a missing verb
is more
this
idea and vote for satisfaction as main
pros of work.
Correct article usage
the main
First
of all money without pleasure will cause negative feelings regarding job itself on somehow long distance. While for some people it’s still possible to force themselves to go every morning to a place which they don’t want to be and do what they don’t want to be involved into
, in most Change preposition
in
cases
it won’t Add a comma
,cases
last
long. For instance
, if one don’t
like what they are doing daily Change the verb form
doesn’t
then
in some time this
activity will be naturally sabotaged by lazyness
, decreased productivity, Correct your spelling
laziness
ans
Correct your spelling
and
also
often being late trying to delay or avoid unpleasant timespending
. So high income may be attractive Correct your spelling
time spending
time-spending
initially
but connected with negative feelings will be pretty soon also
recognized as something non-positive.
Moreover
it possible that there is already enough money available for living and person feeling themselthes
careless about extra funding but thinking more about self-realisation. In Correct your spelling
themselves
this
case
it will be essential to look for some kind of activity which could self-satisfy and provide solid basement for enjoying life process. Add a comma
,case
This
way job may be counted as main
hobby or exposed as one Correct article usage
a main
of
type of art. Change preposition
apply
For
example
millionaires and celebrities could Add a comma
,example
practicing
in Wrong verb form
practice
paining
but that will be for sure not a fast portrait but caligraphy or Correct your spelling
painting
naturemorting
. There may be more reasons than only money to do something and people like to do what they like in most situations.
In summary, it’s possible to find more reasons for daily activity than only straggling for resources required for food, clothes and roof above Correct your spelling
nature outing
head
. From Add an article
the head
this
point of view
good compensations for your time could Add a comma
,view
looks
like Change the verb form
look
Correct your spelling
excellent
excelent
mood and internal Correct article usage
an excelent
fulfillment
so I completely disagree that coins more important than feelings.Change the spelling
fulfilment
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