A big salary is much more important than job satisfaction. Do you agree or disagree?

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there is quite often arise the same old question if big salary
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significant than job satisfaction. I personally completely disagree with
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idea and vote for satisfaction as
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pros of work.
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of all money without pleasure will cause negative feelings regarding job itself on somehow long distance. While for some people it’s still possible to force themselves to go every morning to a place which they don’t want to be and do what they don’t want to be involved
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, in most
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it won’t
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, if one
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like what they are doing daily
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in some time
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activity will be naturally sabotaged by
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and
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often being late trying to delay or avoid unpleasant
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time spending
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. So high income may be attractive
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but connected with negative feelings will be pretty soon
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recognized as something non-positive.
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it possible that there is already enough money available for living and person feeling
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careless about extra funding but thinking more about self-realisation. In
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it will be essential to look for some kind of activity which could self-satisfy and provide solid basement for enjoying life process.
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way job may be counted as
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hobby or exposed as one
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type of art.
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millionaires and celebrities could
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but that will be for sure not a fast portrait but caligraphy or
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. There may be more reasons than only money to do something and people like to do what they like in most situations. In summary, it’s possible to find more reasons for daily activity than only straggling for resources required for food, clothes and roof above
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point of
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good compensations for your time could
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like
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excellent
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mood and internal
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so I completely disagree that coins more important than feelings.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • remuneration
  • financial security
  • motivation
  • luxuries
  • material possessions
  • fulfillment
  • work-life balance
  • stress levels
  • mental well-being
  • job security
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