Some people say History is the most important school subjects. Other people think that, in today's world , subjects like Science and Technology are more important than History. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

The pictures illustrate the transformation of Grange
park
since its establishment in 1920. Overall, it can be seen that Grange
park
has modernized with the
the
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addition of some special features. There was some modification done in relation to water features and the location of rose gardens. The diagram shows that in 1920, Grange
park
has two entrances, one is Arnold avenue and the
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other is Eldon street. It had three rose gardens in every corner, near to it seats were available, which has reduced to two in number, one is in
centre
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and other is in the corner. Earlier, a Beautiful fountain was present in
centre
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which is replaced by a rose garden. On the right side of the
park
, the stage of a musician is changed to Amphitheatre for concerts.
Furthermore
, a special café is made near the entrance for refreshment. Along with it, children play area is introduced in the left corner, which was a pond for water plants before. Nowadays, A new water feature is
also
established on the left side of the
park
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • crucial
  • comprehend
  • retrospect
  • gain insights
  • reflect on
  • sharpen
  • evaluate
  • significance
  • heritage
  • legacy
  • advent
  • breakthroughs
  • sustain
  • sustainability
  • revolutions
  • empowered
  • overcome
  • transform
  • advancements
  • collaboration
  • cooperation
  • diversity
  • fulfilling
  • promote
  • facilitate
  • prosperity
  • enhance
  • foster
  • foundation
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