The growth of online shopping will one day lead to all shops in towns and cities closing. Do you agree or disagree?

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there has been

sudden

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increase

on

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in

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shopping over

internet

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the internet

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and

this

trend

may lead to

closing

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the closing

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of

shops

in towns and cities. In my opinion, yes

traditional

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way of shopping will change in future and the stores to survive must adapt to

this

changing

trend

.

Firstly

, Due to affordability and better reach of

internet

connection, people can browse

internet

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the internet

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using any electronic device which has the capability to connect with

internet

.

This

had allowed companies to develop websites and mobile applications, where they can host their products and customer can browse and

chose

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from

it

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them

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.

This

approach had helped companies to save operational

cost

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costs

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which included shop rent, distributor

cost

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and staff to manage the various

shops

.

For example

, Amazon is one of the largest online retail

website

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and they don’t have any retail stores over the country, because they directly ship their product to the end customer, who had placed their order over

internet

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the internet

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.

Secondly

, the online shopping

trend

will slowly push the brick-and-mortar stores in small towns and cities to close, as they can’t compete with discounted

price

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prices

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provide

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by the online retail websites. But traditional retail

shops

can adapt to

this

changing

trend

and introduce better shopping experiences for the customers. To exemplify, The Nike footwear brand has retail

shops

all over the country and they

also

provide flexibility to shop through their online website, which helps customers to browse through

various

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the various

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collection

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of footwear and place an order using the website and collect the footwear

form

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shop as per their convince. To conclude, online shopping is here to stay and there will be more innovations to enhance and

simply

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the end-users shopping experience, but traditional

shops

with better adaptability can survive and grow too.