To achieve personal happiness, the relationships we have with other people (friends, colleagues, family) are more essential than every other thing. Issues like wealth and occupations take the second place. Write to support this claim.
In the present world, the growing pressures of
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money-driven world we live in widely cause the gravitation towards material items. Linking Words
However
, personal Linking Words
happiness
is not achieved through things like work, wealth, and success. I agree that relationships with friends, colleagues, and family members are the genuine secrets to living happily. Use synonyms
This
will be proven by bringing up the topic of wealthy superstars who steadily live lonely lives and the advice from elderly people based on their experience.
To start with, being famous fans around the world cheering your name, thousands attend your events, and to be rich with many cars, is the dream of many people. But, most of us don’t think about the loneliness superstars are living. Linking Words
For example
, the lead singer of the very successful band “Linking Parks” commit suicide, because he felt unhappy. All Linking Words
this
makes it clear that no one can buy Linking Words
happiness
.
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Secondly
, during all these years the advice of many seniors has proven that human relationships are paramount. Linking Words
For instance
, history showed us that support is needed by anyone to reach their goals, and Linking Words
this
usually comes from the nearest individuals who are loyal. Linking Words
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is a quality that can’t be Linking Words
sought
with money or any materials. Correct your spelling
bought
Thus
it becomes apparent that human relations are more important than wealth.
In conclusion, genuine Linking Words
happiness
can never be bought by wealth and everyone gets to realise Use synonyms
this
when they become old. It is true that relationships with friends, colleaguesLinking Words
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and family members create Remove the comma
apply
happiness
. Use synonyms
Therefore
, the greater the love you give, the greater you receive.Linking Words
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